The Immortals Chronicle

Following review and comments from readers, I had made quite a number of corrections in my book. If you have purchased and download it from Amazon. You can update your  kindle  to see the changes. Thank you again for those comments, and please help me to review my book after reading it so that I can do changes on it for better reading. 

Following review and comments from readers, I had made quite a number of corrections in my book. If you have purchased and download it from Amazon. You can update your kindle to see the changes. Thank you again for those comments, and please help me to review my book after reading it so that I can do changes on it for better reading. 

I received my first review of my book and the reader feedback of what she thought of it. The feedbacks from the reviewer. 1) The layout of storytelling leaves the reader lacking to get fully drawn into the story. 2) I dropped the ball with my odd writing style/format that is a really a distraction for readers from getting fully engrossed in the story and the weaving of my tale falls short for the readers really getting involved. Overall, I'm very appreciated that my first review, the reviewer highlighted me this mistake, with this I will try to improve myself in my writing of my future books. And if you have read my book, please consider leaving reviews so I can use the information too.

Hi Welcome to my blog post for my new book series The Immortals Chronicle. My first book for the Immortals Chronicle just releases in Amazon Kindle. If you got it from elsewhere, please support me by purchasing it in Kindle store or read it for free in Kindle unlimited. Your support and help would greatly assist me in an early release of my other books in the series. Also, leave a review, it will help me to learn from it and will make my other books much better. Many Thanks. M.V Grimm